Her mouth was shut
Yet spoke to me.
Her eyes were shut
Yet saw me.
Her lips were bolted,
Yet kissed me..
She spoke 2 me,
In a voice like never before.
She said to me,
"You have miles to go and loads to live"
She kissed me..
And said farewell...!
π₯ Gratuit Die Familie Stream
5 years ago
After word...
ReplyDeletethis piece was one i'd written spontaneously,when one school day,i was feeling blue-lost and lonely,i took 2 my pen...of all my compositions this remains by far my favourite,giving me the needed spirit 2 move on..at times when things dont seem 2 b going too good
Perfect !!! :-)
ReplyDeletenice poem... considering u wrote it spontaneously...
ReplyDeletekeep writing..
u can check mine too at
http://randomthoughts.ebored.com/
i found it a bit sad...
ReplyDeletethanks yashwant,bk...
ReplyDelete@ nikki
ReplyDeleteits actually really sad..i remember holding back big drops of tears way back in class 9...n though i dnt remember wt was really wrong,m sure the pen did all the talking 4 me.. its actually the 1st tym i really remember bein so miserable
kya motu...
ReplyDeletei know in which condition u wrote this one...
perfect feeling for that time ....